A Story in Miniature - 2022 writing competition

A Story in Miniature writing competition has drawn to a close and we received over 216 entries from over 90 schools across Victoria!
Thank you to each person who entered our writing competition. The judging panel was delighted to read such original, thoughtful and creative miniature stories.
It is with great pleasure that we announce the winners and runners-up for the Story in Miniature competition. Congratulations! You can view each of the entries below. The winning entries will also be published in the upcoming edition of Idiom.

Year 7 and 8 category
There were 107 entries in this category
Ingrid Piva (Year 7, Sacre Coeur) – ‘The Train Chase’

Bethany Cadusch (Year 7, Viewbank College) – ‘Morning rush’
Mietta Palmer (Year 7, Eltham High School)  – ‘A season of misty mornings’

Year 9 and 10 category
There were 70 entries in this category
Poppy Holden (Year 9, Prahran High School) – ‘Thirty Seven’

Alice Portz (Year 9, Academy of Mary Immaculate) – 'Twice in a lifetime'

Year 11 and 12 category
There were 25 entries in this category
Darci Rose (Year 11, Oxley Christian College) – ‘Just a Woman’

Grace McKinnis (Year 11, Academy of Mary Immaculate) – ‘Sunny’
Riley Welsh (Year 12, Rutherglen High School) – ‘Escape’

Teacher category
There were 14 entries in this category
Kerrie van de Ven-Ware (Rutherglen High School) – ‘The Tumble Turn’

Catherine Gallus (John Monash Science School) – ‘Beneath the Surface’

VATE will once again run a writing competition for members in 2022.  Stay tuned for our communications and announcement of the theme toward the end of the year.



VATE is excited to launch our 2022 writing competition A Story in Miniature. Students in Years 7 to 12 and their teachers are invited to submit a story between 300 and 500 words in length inspired by the writing competition theme.

"Short stories do no say this happened and this happened and this happened. They are a microcosm and a magnification rather than a linear progression." - Isobelle Carmody

We encourage students and teachers to find inspiration from the miniature stories that make up their daily life - the small interactions and delightful tidbits that make up their day - and transform them, with brevity, into a piece of polished prose. What could a story in miniature be?

A moment in time.
A short interaction between friends.
A vignette depicting the future.
A portrait of daily life at home.
A slice of an imagined world.
A snapshot into another life.
A glimpse of the past.

Yellow Submarine
Sarah told her friends she'd rather die than go away with her stupid family. She said she'd prefer to make out with some creepy dude with bad breath than endure, for two whole weeks, her brother's surliness, her dad's relentless optimism, her mum's jeans. The morning they pulled out, the sun igniting the dew on their lawn, she stared out of her window and contemplated the vast pointlessness of everything. Thirteen kilometres later, she caught herself humming along to Yellow Submarine on the radio, then noticed her father watching her through the rear-view mirror. He winked. She may have smiled.
© Paul Connolly (Text Publishing)

There are four categories available in the competition. Schools may submit up to five entries in each of the categories.

Years 7 and 8 students | Years 9 and 10 students | Years 11 and 12 students | Teachers

Each entry must be accompanied by a completed entry form and emailed to writingcompetition@vate.org.au by 4pm on Friday 24 June 2022. Entries without a completed entry form will not be considered. The winners of each category will receive a $150 book voucher from VATE's partner bookseller, The Little Bookroom/Neighbourhood Books, and their stories will be published in Idiom. The runners up will receive a book package from our competition supporters.

"It's possible, in a poem or a short story, to write about commonplace things and objects using commonplace but precise language, and to endow those things - a chair, a window curtain, a fork, a stone, a woman's earring - with immense, even startling power." - Raymond Carver

A Story in Miniature: Teaching and Learning Package

VATE is again offering a teaching and learning package to support the teaching of the creative writing process and competition. This year, our package features Australian flash-fiction and short story writers Angela Meyer, Paul Connolly and Adam Thompson. The activities in the package have been designed around the four sections of the writing process:

  • Part One: The Ideas - 'The Dreaming Part'
  • Part Two: The Writing - 'The Making Part'
  • Part Three: The Hurdles - 'The Hard Part'
  • Part Four: The Review ' -The Organising Part'

Each section features video interviews with the writers sharing their insights into constructing short stories and tips for writing within a concise word limit. They unpack the competition theme to give students some inspiration for getting started with their writing and also answer the following questions:

  • Where do you find inspiration for story writing?
  • How do you plan for, and stick to, a small word limit?
  • What kind of clues do you have to leave the reader in a short story?
  • How can a young writer develop an authentic voice?
  • What makes a character interesting and how do you juggle a cast of characters?
  • What is the difference between showing and telling in my work?
  • What is important to look for when polishing a final draft for submission?

The teaching and learning package is available for purchase here.


Angela Meyer is an award-winning Australian writer and editor. Her debut novel, A Superior Spectre, was shortlisted for an Aurealis Award, the MUD Literary Prize, an Australian Book Industry Award, the Readings Prize for New Australian Writing and a Saltire Literary Society Award (Scotland). She is also the author of a novella, Joan Smokes, which won the inaugural Mslexia Novella Award (UK), and a book of flash fiction, Captives. Her second novel, Moon Sugar, will be released in October 2022. Her work has been widely published in magazines, journals and newspapers, including Island, The Big Issue, Best Australian Stories and Kill Your Darlings. She has worked in many areas of the book industry and is now a freelancer. In 2022, one of her projects is to help shift the book industry towards a greener future.


A journalist, author and editor for more than 25 years, Paul Connolly has written for publications including The Monthly, The Guardian (UK), Guardian Australia, The Sydney Morning Herald, and The Age. His flash fiction column, Kitchen Sink Drama, has been published weekly in the Good Weekend magazine since March 2017. In 2020, a collection of 100 of these stories ­– featuring the art of Jim Pavlidis – was published by Text Publishing. Paul has written hard news stories, feature articles, profiles, sport pieces, humour columns and travel stories, as well as four other texts. Paul also teaches media writing at Melbourne University and presents writing workshops for schools and businesses.




Adam Thompson is a pakana writer from Launceston, Tasmania. His work has been published by the Australian Dictionary of Biography, Kill Your Darlings, Good Weekend and Griffith Review – as well as appearing in several anthologies. Adam is the author of Born Into This, which won the Story Prize Spotlight award (US) and was shortlisted for the Queensland Literary Awards, The Age Book of the Year and the Readings Prize for New Australian Fiction. He was named as Tasmanian Aboriginal Artist of the Year in 2019. Adam has written for performance art and television. He is passionate about advancing the interests of the pakana community.